The mass media including TV, radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, whether the mass media has a vital influence on the society and peoples characters or not, has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. Some people believe that TV, radio and newspaper play a great role to form our society and the personalities of individuals while other hold the view that media could not have any principle effects on peoples and the society. In my opinion, I am convinced that the mass media has influence on both the society as well as on people due to educational and psychological reasons.
First and foremost, it has been argued that the educational reason is why I think people usually get their information they need from the media. Although potentially the negative impacts of these subjects that must occasionally be taken into account, I still consider that these sources of information have in many ways enormously enriched people’s lives. For example, a well-known American scientist once said “ the mass media is crucial to have a delighted society”.
Moreover, another factor should be considered is the psychological reason, which in other words, the mass media can easily direct the public opinion by broadcasting the message by the way of what they want. As far as the society is concerned, the ultimate aim of these subjects is to effect on public’s personalities so that the authorities of these kinds of media could have a magnificent control on the society. For example a recent research published on Scientist American revealed that by controlling the mass media governments could dictate variety of opinions to their communities.
To sum up, I hold the view that, the mass media have a great influence on people’s characters and shape the view of society due to educational and psychological reasons.(293)
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 490, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...media has influence on both the society as well as on people due to educational and psycho...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, i think, as well as, by the way, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05921513797 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.4174335813 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.3 104.977214359 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1 7.25397266985 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266197811768 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106805515531 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631832362145 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160482394998 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08377005246 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.