The mass media including TV, radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the irrefutable debate that the mass media influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. There is a widespread concern that some believe mass media is not a counterpart but proponents are against it. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious considerations because the first statement outdo the last ones.
To begin with, there is the deluge of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that at current world mass media is one which designs the future way. In fact, not only do the TV, radio and newspapers change the opinion but also can turn everyone as they wish. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that there is the corresponding relation between mass media and the society. Needless to say, all these merits stand the good path of the society in good stead, as far as bright future is concerned.
On the other hand, one detrimental aspect of this argument is the negative news and programme of the mass media destroy the human life. Besides, they are also able to keep the world in their hand. For the salient example, there are myriad of researches by various government bodies that show that the Australian election is largely affected by the pre-polling result of media. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the mass media.
To recapitulate, in view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of mass media is very influential for the shake of the society are indeed too great to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79856115108 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62484456989 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2807373114 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300661253211 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964879614518 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107923598562 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165703606081 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109508593328 0.0609392437508 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.