The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?

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The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?

In these day, people often take a variety of viewpoints when it comes to most daily life issues. To give an illustration, while many people believe that the mass media including newspaper and radio influence the society and shape our opinions as well as characters, other holds the opinion that this is not the case. This essay offers some insights in favor of the former outlook.

There are numerous reliable grounds to support the belief that our society, opinions and characters are influenced by the mass media such as newspaper and radio. First and foremost, people tend to take the information from the newspaper for granted without verifying the validity and reliability of it and drive their behaviour accordingly. This is especially true when it comes to the breaking news of crimes such as murder and fraud. As such, people would be more watchful when communicating with strangers because none of them wants to fall prey to such incidents.

In addition, ample evidence from a numerous studies also suggests that general public are influenced by the mass media quite easily. There is no doubt that a majority of people has the inclination to purchase for unnecessary products impulsively after seeing an attractive commercial on the television. This leads to loss of time and money of the customers. To give an illustration, children often pester their parents to buy them luxurious toys after seeing them on the television and therefore, trigger a change in their parents’ spending behaviour.

In conclusion, from the analysis above, it is obvious that our society, characters and opinions are subject to alter by the mass media such newspaper and radio.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
In these day, people often take a variety of viewpoi...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'study'?
Suggestion: study
...ddition, ample evidence from a numerous studies also suggests that general public are i...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...m a numerous studies also suggests that general public are influenced by the mass media quite ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13503649635 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76650280109 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1671511605 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302330191813 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108035609762 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171268250123 0.071462118173 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208221547913 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117134229883 0.0609392437508 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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