Mass media plays an important role in peoples ideas.
Public opinion is greatly influenced by Media. It plays a very important role in conveying information and help people in influencing towards opinions made. This essay will discuss how mass media plays an important role in daily life of every individual.
Every days happening can be communicated with the help of mass media. TV visualizes the news form various parts of the world, in different languages in a faster rate of time. For example The Discovery channel telecasts nature,animal kingdom etc which can be a knowledge for children and elders also. The election voting polls updates every minute is being frequently updated by News channels.
Radio is a wireless mean of communication that provides information from different parts of the world. For example the AIR (All India Radio) is one of the oldest radio station since 1950 has been reading news in three different languages. Radio also serves as a source of entertainment by playing music and other entertainment based shows.
This essay states how mass media plays an important role in improvising public ideas. In my opinion media plays an important role in helping people to update day to day information the surroundings. Mass media indicates the fact "How communication is effective in modern days?".
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...e in daily life of every individual. Every days happening can be communicated with...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es in a faster rate of time. For example The Discovery channel telecasts nature,a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , animal
... The Discovery channel telecasts nature,animal kingdom etc which can be a knowledge fo...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
... nature,animal kingdom etc which can be a knowledge for children and elders also. The elect...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... be a knowledge for children and elders also. The election voting polls updates ever...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng frequently updated by News channels. Radio is a wireless mean of communicatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 20.9802955665 24% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2572815534 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90765353037 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7497874573 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3076923077 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418219992807 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149272090655 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175223634015 0.071462118173 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264299824882 0.151781067708 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230761934147 0.0609392437508 379% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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