Mass media like TV and newspapers influence people, particularly the young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape society?
The mass media, including television, radio, and newspapers, have a great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Give reasons and relevant examples to support your answer.)
Recently, mass media has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “will mass media like TV and newspapers influence people?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that mass media works as a pivot to shape the society, particularly young generation, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the social and political standpoint, public opinion is bound up inextricably with governmental policies, which indicates they lead to both public perception and social conduct. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between environmental factors and hectic lifestyle as well as an exponential increase in moral issues. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of having a destructive impact is correlated positively with not only globalization but also political policy reform.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I entirely agree that mass media play an important role in shaping people’s ideas. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as for, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1207.87684729 163% => OK
No of words: 334.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88622754491 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30948717594 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 139.433497537 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691616766467 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 379.143842365 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0740523432 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.066666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177565103075 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446779281325 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707837358485 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118193566164 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106677056107 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 55.0591133005 258% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.