The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to develop countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in develop countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of migrating people has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “does it affect increased major problems in developed countries?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that it has various effects on developed countries, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the sociological standpoint, industrialization is bound up inextricably with becoming industrial, which indicates they lead to both migration from poor countries and seeking asylum. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between environmental factors and traditional lifestyle as well as an exponential increase in commercial issues. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of criminal acts is correlated positively with not only lack of surveillance but also globalization.
Within the realm of socioeconomy, without the slightest doubt, refugees attribute to illegal migrants, in that it would come down to xenophobia, cultural shock, and cultural dispute. A salient example of such attribution is hidden agenda, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take an alternative solution for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint current system problems. Besides, this criterion is an indispensable part of modern lifestyle. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of the political dimensions of migration.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I entirely agree that immigration has both constructive and destructive effects on developed countries. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81468531469 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35166625471 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699300699301 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2033773599 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176581925116 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473333275339 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760857017098 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104214106323 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968543842975 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 55.0591133005 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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