Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
It is irrefutable to say that mass medias have burgeoned to become popular. Although it is regarded by a considerable number of people that popular medias such as TV, newspaper as well as the Internet are not effective in peoples` lifestyle, I am inclined to highly believe that they play a vital role in our society. This essay will elucidate some reasons why such medias are quite crucial.
There are myriads of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that digital revolutions open up venues for culture change. For instance, to measure the effect of the Internet on global communication, a recent scientific research conducted by Yazd University researchers in 2010 has shown that those who use electronic medias in their daily basis tendencies to shape their ideas. Hence, beneficial ramifications of such an idea can be seen with clarity.
The other predominant reason for influencing the lives by media empires is mass media can make contributions to mold people`s minds by broadcasting pre-selected contents. For example. to understand the relationship between media companies and information sharing, the result of a study undertaken by Tehran University researchers revealed that media events are positively correlated with an invasion of privacy, which leads to not only telecommunication but also obtaining information by social media and radio stations. Therefore, it is evident that media specialize would make a deep-seated effect on the culture and lifestyle of society.
To conclude, whilst there are several compelling arguments on the impact of international media on nations, my personal sentiment is that the kind of living are quite impressed by them and should be promoted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41155234657 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12085040998 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5305668867 50.4703680194 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.9 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121274851145 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421267511983 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343431878033 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660205083605 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398514691197 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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