Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
Recently, mass media has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question, “is it advantageous or not?” Whereas it is a widely held view that radio is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the news standpoint, digital developments are bound up inextricably with media policies, which indicates they lead to both information sharing and state-of-the-art technologies. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between globalization and radio as well as an exponential increase in media bias achievements. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far support the contention that the likelihood of occurring mainstream is correlated positively with not only irreversible changes but also adverse outcomes.
Within the realm of media science, without the slightest doubt, efficient broadcasting systems attribute to alternative hypotheses, in that it would come down to governmental interventions, news implications, and reporting institutions. A salient example of such attribution is information sharing, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take target audience improvements for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint media bias problems. Likewise, hardly had they confine their attention to editorial, news bulletin, and even propaganda. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of systematic changes.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I entirely agree that mass media is of high importance. However, we perceive that with the benefit of hindsight, the more we research, the further we discover. Meanwhile, as a feasible solution, the local authorities are recommended to enforce strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...oes 'all's well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1207.87684729 146% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92953020134 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44922208795 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 139.433497537 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 379.143842365 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3045663835 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.923076923 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787303855068 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227533796546 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024052392726 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459870974913 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102917016814 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.41 11.5310837438 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.4 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 55.0591133005 229% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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