Media has a high influence on the way people in a society think. Do you agree with this statement? Provide some reasons to justify your answer.
Some people believe media affect and change the way of people’s thought and others argue on the opposite. However, in my perspective, news coverage influence the overall direction of the society.
To begin with, as per the job classification, media are responsible and have authority to publish, share the news of different activities of the society and hence the news from them influence the most. For instance, in a survey conducted by jounalism.com among students of engineering of Carvard University, 87 percentage of survey population responded that news about any events from journalists were most influential of all.
Secondly, every people, society, country are undergoing different experiences and it is not possible for one to have all the same experiences. However, one can learn from other experiences, mistakes, sufferings and can opt the best alternative to solve their issues. For example, Country Bhopal suffered the recession and most of the causes of recession matched with those had caused economic crisis in country Depal. Thus Bhopal solved the issue by approaching the same modality as Depal had gone so far.
In a nutshell, media, who are authentic to publish and spread news, should write news without any exaggeration for it renders both positive and negative influences in people, society, country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...aused economic crisis in country Depal. Thus Bhopal solved the issue by approaching ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, all the same, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41626794258 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96188094281 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655502392344 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9162637309 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.777777778 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103587118815 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446598984185 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584960487689 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734826015309 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571988079819 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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