Medical technology can increase life expectancy. Is it a blessing or a curse?
Recently, the phenomenon of medical technology and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of medical inventions is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that equipped hospitals can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, life expectancy can provide the society with some noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that the merits of social satisfaction, as well as developed countries, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the importance of social health on people life duration. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both new treatment methods and old patients apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, traditional medical devices might increase the consequences of pharmaceutical companies. Moreover, The fundamental aspects of uneducated doctors might relate to this reality that the demerits of old-fashioned clinics pertain to herbal medicine. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of living tendency is correlated negatively with healthy food. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of traditional medicine.
Finally, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of technological development far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of medical industries prove the significance of well-educated inventors, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7984496124 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35898727373 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670542635659 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5317816725 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169507158465 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050780771478 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401373267063 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848744520802 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273112912526 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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