Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved for women? What is your opinion?

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Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved for women? What is your opinion?

There are some arguments about the regardless of whether the government should have legislation for equal number of gender in a work place.Personally, my stance is to support that government to do so.

On one hand, people should obstacle their tradition concept and believe that women also have good performance for their work. In the past decades, women played a role which was being a housewife. Additionally, there was rarely to see full-time working women. However, the generation is changing especially after the women Additionally, we can see women have numerous distribution and outstanding performance for the society. Gender should be the issue to limit women's talent.

On the other hand, men and women have different thinking of reactions so it benefits to any organization they participate. More specifically, they can improve the work efficiency by the views from both male and female. Furthermore, business world is very competitive, once adopt more different thoughts of both sexual genders would have more chance to reach the goal efficient.

In conclusion, governments should encourage that organizations have certain percentage for women to take high-level positions as their performance can be as good as men and various thoughts from both gender can achieve their business goal more efficient.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4487804878 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06735803361 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.922532248 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.7 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200911714819 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825964897005 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685398176327 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130161381558 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796715407814 0.0609392437508 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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