Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved for women? What is your opinion?
It has been observed that most of the high-level employments are done by the male. This phenomenon has stirred a debate across the world, many people think that all the labour intensive and high-level jobs should be done by men, whereas opponents believe that women should also get equal opportunities as both the genders are equal. In my opinion, the government should encourage or reserve the jobs for female. This essay will divulge both sides of arguments and further conclude the statement.
To begin with, generally, men are considered physically stronger than women, hence most of the laborious work used to be completed by men. However, nowadays, women are playing a crucial role in the society. Women contributing in various fields such as farms, army, politics corporate and management. For instance, a famous astronaut, Kalpana Chawla has reached the summit of her career and inspired many follow women. Hence, high-level employment is not related to men, but women are also playing an equal role.
Furthermore, the government is also running a myriad of awareness programmes for motivating girls and women. They have reserved seats for jobs in various fields. For instance, in India, 33% all the government jobs are reserved for ladies. Therefore, it is inevitable to ignore the role of women in high-level jobs.
In the view of the aforementioned arguments, one can conclude that women and men play an equal role in the society. I believe the government should reserve seats for women and motivate them for all kind of jobs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11462450593 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72149815425 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7402379172 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2666666667 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435716395233 0.242375264174 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145925797979 0.0925447433944 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101742582823 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266506163726 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08552238495 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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