The newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society, what is your opinion?

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The newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society, what is your opinion?

The importance of the newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society. Which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This easy will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive/negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one steam from the fact that the newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that I think that newspaper is very important in modern life for humans. Needless to say all these merits stand in a good bad stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint there are some merits demerits but one of the crucial effects is that now day’s newspaper provide information the world. Hence it is apparent why many are against in favor of this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits drawbacks of the newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society one indeed too great dire to ignore.

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Average: 7.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...no longer a need in the modern society. Which was always debatable has now become mor...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...wspaper provide information the world. Hence it is apparent why many are against in ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s no longer a need in the modern society one indeed too great dire to ignore.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, while, i think, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93693693694 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79785939718 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9057433619 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272299937985 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12170871969 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182760079012 0.071462118173 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167005230637 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821025115595 0.0609392437508 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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