Now a days many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work to another city.
Do you think this has more advantages then disadvantages for young peoples? Support your answer with reasons and example from your own experience.
The effect of young people leave native towns, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of the step to move one city to another has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. It can be said that it has benefits and demerits. This essay will elaborate that how it can be beneficial and how it has disadvantages and then lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why travel from home city to another is beneficial, but the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that sometime standard of study in those cities is not good and they move to others cities to get batter education. As an illustration, they leave homes for their batter future opportunities because they do not have enough opportunities in their home cities. In addition, young people aim to move another cities is high standard education and more job opportunities. Thus, by this way this step will be batter for their upcoming life.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of the travelling to another city but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that it may be not useful decision to proceed to another city. Because of lack of awareness of new city. For instance, if a person move from his home town to other place, he will have to now the city and without his family. It may be overwhelm his step because it is always difficult to survive without them. Thus, because of that it may not useful.
From what have discussed above, it can concluded that the impact of proceed to other city are prominent, and the way the drawbacks has discussed, it should be well-handled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'conclude'
Suggestion: conclude
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72068456455 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2245728078 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186533766585 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615834187839 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051242514643 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104002268583 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651773790393 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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