Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about for many young people, leaving home and family in earlier age. If it should be viewed as positive and negative impact on young people. While it is possible claimed that it is accepted a good chance by a large number of people. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both side of argument.
To embark with, There are several reason in the support of why many people, leaving homes and family in earlier age concerned to advantages to the young people. One of them is that this could bring the best job opportunities or study with better facilities for them. It can also be argued that when young people leave home and family and start living person become more able take care of themselves and hold responsibility to earn money. It should also be taken in account that young people learn new language and culture of that particular area or country.
Those who disadvantages for many people, leaving homes and family in earlier age have a different view and say that it can actually not be a good. Then there are consumed that leaving home and family at an early age in other place could make far from family. Some time young people adapted new thing and forget their own culture. Some time people who live alone in far of families have been involves in mental diseases, drug or even crime.
To end, While there are strong argument on both side of case. My opinion is that leaving at early age is good for them because young people know about their responsibility. I would strongly recommend that leaving home for education or work is benefit for young people .
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
there are some grammatical issues in this essay.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: ? 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 293 350
No. of Characters: 1322 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.137 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.512 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.245 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.34 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve and negative impact on young people. While it is possible claimed that it is accep...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ed that it is accepted a good chance by a large number of people. In this essay, I shall explain ...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...of argument. To embark with, There are several reason in the support of why many people, leav...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age concerned to advantages to the young people. One of them is that this could b...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cilities for them. It can also be argued that when young people leave home and fa...
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Line 2, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... responsibility to earn money. It should also be taken in account that young peop...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion is that leaving at early age is good for them because young people know about...
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Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion or work is benefit for young people .
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on or work is benefit for young people .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61092150171 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30781999609 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2189401201 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336278974299 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112640542476 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944724221341 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215998698987 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353879047005 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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