Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.'Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
leaving home at an early age contributes some positive and negative impacts. The substantial influence of leaving home in early stage sparked controversy to many people. This essay will elaborate my views on the good and bad side of the topic mentioned above.
At the outset, there are many reasons why it is helpful to leave home at an early age. For example, it will give you child a sense of being independent in a way that she will take care of himself alone. Secondly, it give your child a sense of responsibilty.For instance, at that early age will know how to solve simple problems on her own. As for my own experience, I've been away from home since I was grade school and it give me self-confidence to work abroad later on.
Nevertheless, there are some people who adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that if they will allow them to leave at early stage, tendencies are they will be in danger. As an illustration, child who leave home at early stage are prone to get involve in crimes as influence by peers. As of my experience, my friend was engaged in alcohol ans smoking at early age, as he leave home that early.
In conclusion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantaged as what has been discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62272727273 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74064524586 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586363636364 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3628812943 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298401140916 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118723743757 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574700850815 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164278037452 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635422837426 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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