Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?
A matter of considerable controversy is the effect of mass communication and media on our lives. I agree that television, radio and newspapers have become a priority in our lives. This will be shown by looking at how mass media is the main source of news and entertainment.
Mass media, including TV and radio, is the main source of news. We can only know what is happening in the world and follow the economic trends through the mass media, hence make important decisions concerning our lives. For instance, The New York Times reported in march 2015 that after announcing in the news about the economic problem in the middle east, most investors avoided investing their money there and it dramatically affected the area. Thus, this makes it clear how mass media have important role in our daily decisions.
In addition to that, TV and radio programs have always been the main source of entertainment in our homes. Moreover, they have great effect on people's behaviors. For example, a recent poll bu the UK government found that 68% of house wives and children try to mimic their favorite celebrities after watching their entertainment shows. Therefore, this clearly shows how mass media can highly influence people's lives and affect their behavior.
In conclusion, since the mass media now has become an imperative source of information, I believe that its importance and effect on our lives is increasing dramatically every day, not only in fashion and entertainment, but also in other aspects of life. Hence, it is advised that communities start to use it wisely, to be able to avoid any negative ramifications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ome an imperative source of information, I believe that its importance and effect...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01481481481 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82434060673 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9399453661 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314038346879 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125591399806 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105325296899 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194341551097 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942062086372 0.0609392437508 155% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.