You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available f

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You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.
Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available for an interview

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of hotel receptionist. I knew about it from the advertisement published in the local newspaper on Monday the 5th of December

I am graduate of the faculty so arts, English Literature department. In addition, I am currently studying for my masters degree in English literature at Cairo University. I had worked for two years in an international communications company's costumer service. My current post is a receptionist in a five stars hotel in Hurghada. I have been working there for five years now.

I would like to join the team of your hotel for several reasons. First, the hotel is one of the most luxurious establishments In Cairo and anyone would be honored to work there. Furthermore, I have to leave Hurghada and move to Cairo to complete my masters degree's studies, which means that I have to quit my current job.

I am available for an interview at your nearest convenience.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,
Mirna Milad

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'communication'?
Suggestion: communication
...orked for two years in an international communications companys costumer service. My current p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99627340558 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1712587807 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295590791596 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104318104579 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625813203884 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14773684114 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486213576308 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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