Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
In this industrialized world, people are moving to the larger cities for a plethora of needs and may actually face many problems. The people who are living in larger cities may usually feel isolated compared to the people in villages. This essay will explain why governments should take necessary actions to encourage people to live in small towns and how the people can be reduced in various access such as commutation and job opportunities.
To begin with, there are many problems faced by the people who are living in the larger cities. The major problems faced by the people are the long distance commutation to the workplace. Moreover, the people living in the isolated areas also faces isolation from neighbors and relatives. The main reason is, people in the cities are living their own life, and not interacting or involving in other persons life and leading a busy schedule.
On the other hand, most of the people are moving to the larger cities for myriad of reasons including job opportunities and better life style. For instance, there are many large industries and companies are offering more job for the people which makes people to move to the cities. So, the government should think about the alternative methods to prevent these movements as it leads cities overcrowded and polluted.
In conclusion, the government should encourage industry people to start their business in the smaller towns which can help people to reduce their travelling hours, also over population in the cities. In my opinion, villages or the outskirts of the towns are the better options for living, if it gives all the facilities to the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00729927007 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6121802263 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514598540146 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8767179225 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438526653177 0.242375264174 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165228391722 0.0925447433944 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639086878844 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262114031271 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363826419589 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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