Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion?
In this day and age, spending time in front of TV has become a debatable issue among people from all walks of life all around the world. Although TV channels play an increasingly important role in spreading news and awareness, there are a number of people hold the opposite view. This essay will first discuss the potential negative impacts of TV along with supporting arguments, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are myriad of reasons why TV is dangerous, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that many people spend too much time watching TV and that causes serious eye injuries. According to startling research, for example, around 30% of people suffering from eye diseases by watching TV in the United States.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that TV plays a significant role in keeping them up to date with current affairs. It should also be taken into account that television decreases the depression and loneliness of elderly people. As an illustration, extensive research has shown that elderly who watch TV for two hours per day release better happy hormones from their body.
To put it in nutshell, while there are several persuasive arguments on both sides, my opinion depicts that every individual should use the TV wisely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01369863014 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66435128104 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680365296804 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.6666666667 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.0 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157805893602 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624475278576 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034184993419 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879952029311 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288751479645 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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