parents are responsible for the behavior of children.to which extent you agree or disagree?
Child behaviour are equally responsible to that of their parents.Some people think that parents are held equally responsible for the behaviour of their children, while others keep up that children can change behaviour according to the atmosphere which surrounds them. In my opinion, former view outweighs latter view. This essay will discuss why to point out parents for the behaviour of their children.
To begin with, children will imitate just like their parents as they see parents as their role model.Young juveniles will turn out to bad if parents show their bad attitude towards them. For example, if parents always yell at them children are affected badly and when they grow up will develop harsh attitude towards everyone. As a result, parents will feel negligible about the way they taught children.
On the other hand, critics point out that children behaviour and thoughts depends upon various situations such as in schools and in neighbourhood.Children will change their behaviour if they see misbehaviour at school, like how others behave with them. For instance, at school, naughty child will do many naughty things and if a decent child see it, will learn rapidly from them. Moreover, children can learn things very quickly.
To conclude, parents are also treated for their childrens behaviour.In my opinion, children will learn good things only if parents guide them properly no matter how the situation the child is in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23706896552 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69020427087 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9963157002 50.4703680194 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.25397266985 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200570908381 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967526012236 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578213513489 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142779362098 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487355499218 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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