some people think laws change human behavior.do you agree?
Recently the phenomenon of government law changes human behavior has sparked a heated debate. Some people opine that laws change human behavior, while others assert that human behavior cannot be changed. I agree with the former view. This essay will discuss both sides of compelling arguments and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance, the most preponderant one is that there is a drastic change in behaviour and thinking patterns in people because of the stringent laws emposed by the government. Individuals do not commit adultery, murder, steal due to the laws. For example, in Saudi arabia, when government decided to impose fines and lashes for people who commit adultery, there has been a drastic decrease in the crime . As a result, people get away from doing criminal offenses.
On the darker side, opponents argue against this statement asserting that people commit crimes even though they are aware of the laws because of their human nature. Moreover, humans cannot change such behaviours due to laws, as it is heredity in nature and they are used to commit crimes always inspite of the severe punishments. For instance, human beings steal things and such behaviour has been seen from their parents or relatives which cannot be changed. Hence, as every individual should take action themselves to change their behaviour and attitudes.
In recapitulation, this essay has discussed both sides of the arguments. In my opinion, since there are governments to impose laws to change our behaviour, we humans should also think to change our minds first.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56988342221 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3252931242 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370694337255 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117690755606 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110839746535 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218119040024 0.151781067708 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960545279577 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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