cheap travel overseas travel does more damage than good.
Recently the phenomenon of cheap travel of goods through overseas has sparked a heated debate. Some people assert that it is very low-cost method, while others argue that such methods cause damage to all goods. This essay will discuss that it cause damage to goods despite some significant downsides.
To commence with, there are myriad of reasons to not export goods through cheap overseas. First and foremost, it can cause a great damage to goods without proper care by the staffs and people who are involved during the travel. Furthermore, people will not give utmost importance to few goods if its heavy. For example, in Japan a great damage has occurred to goods which are shipped through cheap ways. Thus, it will not only damage the goods but also will take longer duration of days to reach respective place.
On the flip side, some people are of the view that goods should be shipped through cheap method, because they can not bear the prices of goods imported through air ways. Probing further, they think it is a convenient way of shipping items. Moreover, they are unaware of the fact that it damage of properties will not occur. For instance, in China many products which are shipped overseas was seen broken and damaged even though it did cost half price of flight. Hence, shipping goods through cheap method can harm our goods which are delicate and strong too.
To recapitulate, this essay has discussed the consequences of shipping items on a cheap overseas travel. In my opinion, people should be aware of the problems involved in cheap methods and go for better options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29146481233 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2519746203 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301601991313 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113222020354 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828451776597 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203521488272 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396886797846 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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