Parents are responsible for the behaviour of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree
These days, it has been a growing trend to see researchers believing that parents are responsible for their children’s acts. There are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am fond of the opinion that the former outdo the later.
At the outset, there are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that family is considered to be the first institution where a child learn how to behave in a society. This is because children intent to absorb and intimidate everything which they observe. Not only do parents play an essential role in shaping their children’s behaviour, but they also teach them the moral value such as holding the old in high regard. Thus, all these upsides stand children in good stead when it comes to a good role model.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and believe that parents should not be accountable for the behaviours of their offspring. The primary one stems from the fact that the parental influence is merely one of the numerous factors that could corrupt children’s morale. This is because children spend most of their time with their peers at school during the maturity stage, thus they would be also influenced by external environment. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the responsibility of parents for their children’s acts.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite the external factors, parents remain part and parcel of the development of children.
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Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, nevertheless, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.048 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85235621899 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9856447136 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220042683357 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799356416078 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706577714038 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12852262471 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362164402629 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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