Parenting plays a vital role in moulding the behaviour of children. Sometimes kids behave in an unacceptable and unpredictable manner which they might have learnt from their parents. Some people think that parents are responsible for their children’s behaviours, while others argue that parents cannot take responsibility for their children’s attitudes. I am inclined to believe that parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. The impacts of kids’ behaviours and suggest the parent ’s role in raising their children.
First of all, children are like a sponge, they absorb and imitate everything they observe. Further, they spend more time with their parents in childhood. So mostly they learn language, culture and manners by observing their parents. If parents are having good habits, with a vision to have good habits. For instance, after Thomas Alva Edison’s school teacher called him mentally ill in a letter, Edison’s mother hid the letter from the young inventor and homeschooled him so that he could reach his full potential.
Second of all, a responsible parenting involves not only taking care of children's basic needs but also teaching social behaviour and discipline to them. Furthermore, for the damages caused by their children in society. For example, the leading actor Jackie Chan had taken responsibility for his son's drug use and apologised to public on behalf of him by telling that he failed to be a good father.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that the parents are solely and legally responsible for their children’s act. Further, it is expected that the people make cognisance of the fact and teach their children good values and moral responsibilities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46909090909 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07081382058 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4808031384 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265380224244 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107907769181 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823111683078 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180416956054 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773471408924 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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