Parents should be held legally responsible for the actions of their children. Do you agree with this opinion?
Support your position with your own study, experience or observations.
Recently, parents responsibilities toward their children's acts have sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question are parents liable for their youth's behaviors?". Whereas, it is a widely held view that both parents and society must remain accountable for children's actions. I will discuss the controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the legal and social standpoint, teenagers' misdeed is bound up inextricably with the parental control, which indicates they both lead to antisocial behaviors and crimes. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2013 demonstrates the relationship between legal punishments and rehabilitation as well as an exponential increase in unemployment. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of adequate training is correlated positively with not only social developments but also legal prohibitions.
Within the realm of family background, without the slightest doubt, formative years attribute to committing offenses, in that it would come down to divorces, poverty, and proper schooling. A salient example of such attribution is child's personalities, which is a cause of concern since it was mistaken to take strict rules for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars have had the opportunity to pinpoint lenient parents problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to authoritarian mentors, upbringing methods, and even foster families. Hence, it is correct to infer the pivotal role of parents in children's social behaviors.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all' well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I entirely agree that both parents and governments are responsible for children's actions. Meanwhile, local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...aying goes 'all well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1207.87684729 144% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93197278912 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29115336916 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9065707252 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21437648229 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609477476951 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448692999362 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120238389687 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045411466504 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 11.5310837438 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 55.0591133005 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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