Parents should be held legally responsible for the children’s act what is your opinion.
From our childhood whatever we learn from our parents and by observing our surroundings. It is a highly debatable issue that parents should be held responsible for children’s activities or not. Some people believe that parents are the only who responsible for the children’s activities while some ignore this notion. In this essay, I will deliver necessary arguments before jumping to conclusion.
Parents are the first mentor of the children. Parenting plays a focal role in children’s upbringing. To begin with the positive side, children absorb and imitate from his parent and surrounding. Further, they spend most of the time at home and learn the language, culture, rituals, and many more things so if parents following good practices so children will follow the same automatically by observing them.
Another pivotal aspect of my stance is, responsible parenting not only encompasses taking care of the children but also making him accountable for his mistakes and learning discipline. For example, in one of the interview, famous celebrity Mr. Jacky Chan confessed that he is a failure as a father for his son’s drug addiction and expresses the regret of the public.
To sum up, with the aforementioned points, one can conclude that the parent is solely and legally responsible for the children’s act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a responsible'.
Suggestion: who is a responsible
...eople believe that parents are the only who responsible for the children's activities whil...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to discipline'
Suggestion: to discipline
...countable for his mistakes and learning discipline. For example, in one of the interview, ...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
.... For example, in one of the interview, famous celebrity Mr. Jacky Chan confessed that he is a f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35545023697 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12987159868 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.388409544 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.727272727 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393585456263 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157898395344 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125989688451 0.071462118173 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238003938976 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071856763668 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.