What is your view on the idea that it takes failure to achieve to success?
it is the nature of all-human that they want to become a successful person in this world and for this purpose no matter what type of way they adopt. One group of people give the opinion that to become a successful man, it is necessary to go through a number of failure experiences while others believe that it all depends on the personal qualities and abilities. This essay will argue that to what extent the bad experiences are helpful in a successful man and how he takes help to move forward.
To get a vast knowledge of any particular field, the experience is must and without practical knowledge, it is almost impossible for anyone to get full command in that particular field. For example, you learn a lot of theory during your medical degree but without practice in any hospital, you cannot get surety that it will work on the patient or not. Therefore, some experience is really important to become a good doctor.
Similarly, it not necessary that always you will get the positive results of your practical work, you will face a lot of failures and bad experience in your life and successful person learn from his mistakes because these mistake guide you towards perfection. For example, Edison did a hundred experiments before the invention of the bulb. So, if you fail in some task it will create a new way to learn more and accurate.
This essay narrated that why the failures and to continue struggle is important to reach on top and got perfection in your field. I completely agree with this statement that man learns something after losing something else.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74181818182 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59226057256 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6736329173 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151000801169 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519690640692 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534696241908 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862552475997 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502704588013 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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