Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact parents should be responsible for every act of their children. Critics, however, claim that in addition to parents society is equally responsible for the actions performed by children. In my opinion, the former argument is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important features of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that the perfect guardian of children are parents and they are responsible for the upbringing of them. The most conspicuous one stem from the fact that first institute of child is his home and he imitates their parents and siblings. Therefore, lesson of honesty, discrimination between right and wrong,, trust and truthfulness, he learns from parents. As a prime example, think of a person, who lives his entire life with a strong believe of truthfullness, which his mother gave him while he was a child and ultimately, he is protected from all sins.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that society has equal role to build pressure on individuals’ acts. Thus, persons’ acts are some times emerged from non friendly situations and this would ultimately provokes crime and other criminal activities.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that parents are more responsible for their childrens’ act than society. Thus, parents should be careful while teaching their child at every single step of life. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34865900383 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97388604013 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9186713589 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288571284107 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101762111281 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10133593709 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178479145966 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102803887419 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.