Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s activities. What is your opinion?
Parents are the first mentor of the child. Parents should be legally held responsible for the children’s act has created a chaos in the country. Some people state that parents are solely responsible while some opines parents are not solely responsible for the children’s act. However, I strongly believe that parents are the only responsible for the children’s act. In the following paragraph, I am going to discuss why parents are merely responsible for the children’s act.
To begin with the positive side, there are myriad benefits of parenting but the most conspicuous one is children learn by imitating in the surrounding atmosphere. Further, children spend most of the time with their parents and the grandparents so he learns rituals, language by observing them. In addition, if the parents have the good qualities then the children will be more likely the vision of them. For instance, Edition’s teacher calls him mentally ill, however, at that, his mother didn’t support him then today we’ll not have a genius scientist today.
Likewise, responsible parents not only include only taking care of children but also include making child accountable for his mistakes and realizing not to repeat such kind of bearing. For example, in one of the interviews of Jackie Chine, he publically confessed that he is a failure in the role of a father because of his son’s drug addiction and other bad practices.
In summary, the aforementioned points reveal the true picture of parenting plays an extremely responsible title role in children’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36507936508 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10700601779 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3053449723 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41829224811 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177101765513 0.0925447433944 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129630844364 0.071462118173 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234642290382 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132546243223 0.0609392437508 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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