Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Support it with personal examples.
It is irrefutable to say that, violence by juveniles has increased in recent years at an alarming rate in
our society. Children are involving themselves in crime and making our society jeopardize.
Considering this, some people opine that parents should be responsible for their young one’s fault,
while others argue parents should not be punished. The following paragraphs will analyze for inevitable reasons and will lead to a plausible conclusion.
Disagree
On one hand, parents should not be blamed for their children’s fault as the decision to commit the
crime is entirely made by the children. There are many parents who have done their best part in the
upbringing of their children so that their child cannot commit any offense, yet, their offspring still
succeed in committing the same. Moreover, mass media is playing a crucial role in making adolescents
aggressive. For example, currently, there are many violent games and movies that are being released
in the market. This makes a child more violent which could be one of the reasons for committing the
crime.
Agree
On the other hand, parents should be held accountable for their children’s crimes because parents
are the first people that a child gets to know after he or she is born. It is believed that parents start
shaping the child’s moral compass and character from a very young age. In addition, most of the
children do offense because they were violently abused by their parents when they were young. For
instance, according to 2013 statistics, in America, most offenses were made by juvenile belongs to a
criminal family.
Conclusion
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, parents should not be solely blamed and punished for their
children’s actions. Other factors should be taken into account when deciding on whom to blame. The government must take some prudent steps to educate children in their schools so that they do not
commit a crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2358490566 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73342804757 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.797124073 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329906877443 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111945572346 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984095113138 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120185641489 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107491052241 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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