Recently, the phenomenon of the invention of antibiotics, airplane, and computers which are the important revolution in the past 100 years ago and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of industry revolution is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive by substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that transforming the way one live by computers can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From social standpoint, computer, antibiotics , and airplane which have caused fundamental change in the past decades can provide the society with some noticeable effect which are rooted in the fact that merits of disseminating information all around the world as well as curing diseases, are inextricably bound up. According yo my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered convenient travel. Thus, beneficial ramifications of accessible data and short flight apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, computers, antibiotics and airplane which have revolutionized people's life might increase consequences of making our lives convenient . Moreover, fundamental aspects of leisurely journey would relate to this reality that demerits of preventive vaccine pertain to increasing one's health. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that broadband connection by computers is correlated negatively to hackers. Hence, it is correct to presume preconceived notion of being in a good health.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that merits of computers, antibiotics, and airplane which make people's life easy outweigh its demerits. Not only do the advantages of response well to treatment would prove the significance of having enjoyable trip, but also pinpoint curing people who are critically ill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67558528428 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20664961249 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66220735786 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3482718967 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.416666667 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115776847437 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360017110183 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690649684793 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658780896423 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664996312819 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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