Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of law which changes the human's behavior and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of obeying rules by individuals is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive by substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that law abiding citizen can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From social standpoint, altering one's behavior as a result of changing law can Provide the society with noticeable effect which are rooted in the fact that the merits of complying with rules and regulations , are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered beneficial behavior. Thus, beneficial ramifications of being well-organised behavior apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, changing human behavior and manner because of changing law might increase consequences of anti social behavior. Moreover, fundamental aspects of abnormal behavior would relate to this reality that demerits of disordered behavior pertain to emotional disturbance. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that downside of emotional experience is correlated negatively with abnormal behavior . Hence, it is correct to presume preconceived notion of facing heavy penalty.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of changing human's behavior as a result of changing law outweigh its demerits. Not only do the advantages of having safety society would prove the significance of having better quality life, but also pinpoint having high standard of life implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66420664207 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14105500899 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0897253633 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261557656856 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902435292381 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829203956664 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150074179314 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410268082282 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.