Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of changing behavior as a result of law and its corresponding has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of introducing law is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that complying rules and regulations can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, law which changes human's attitudes can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of safety society, as well as combating the crimes, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered positive behavior. Hence, beneficial ramifications of having positive approach toward law apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, law which exerts an pernicious influence on human's behavior might increase consequences of facing heavy fines. Moreover, fundamental aspects of conducting crimes would relate to this reality that demerits of abnormal behavior pertain to anti social behavior. As a tangible example some academic research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that downside of diverse effects on one's manner is correlated negatively with immorality. Thus, it is correct to presume preconceived notion increasing being anxious.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that merits of law which changes one's behavior outweigh its demerits.Thus, the positive aspects of human's behavior should be stressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63095238095 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10791816636 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1160786515 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211855077776 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751103883326 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591982291444 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133805689145 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258660061119 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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