Is it often argued that people do not pay attention to climate change because it is still very early to feel its damaging effects. Instead, humanity must focus on providing immediate actions to solve air pollution and air quality. It is agreed that we should first find an immediate solution to tackle the air pollution. This will be shown by analyzing that air pollution affects the quality of life as well as the health of our planet.
Undoubtedly, humans cannot live in a place where the air he breathes is polluted. This is due to the fact that pollution causes severe diseases such as lung cancer. To cite a primary example, according to a recent study published in 2009, the number of people who have lung diseases in China increased dramatically in the past 5 years. Thus, it is quite evident that in order to prevent these kind of diseases, we must first address the issue of our air quality.
Furthermore, the ever increasing amount of unhealthy particles in the air has detrimental effect to our planet. As a matter of fact, air pollution prevents unwanted heat and radiation to escape from the atmosphere. For instance, a recent study shows that there is an excessive amount of carbon dioxide particles in the Earth's atmosphere which causes our planet the temperature of our planet rise to an unacceptable level. Hence, it is clear that air pollution is the main reason why our planet is becoming hotter.
In conclusion, air pollution brings many diseases and can make our planet uninhabitable. Therefore, it is vital to take immediate and drastic measures to address this environmental issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... quite evident that in order to prevent these kind of diseases, we must first address the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84363636364 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66833281283 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3568849927 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153395916092 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569717121651 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462074285809 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964196382622 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554750699154 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.