In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the
Advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
it is often argued that the world is now becoming a cash free society and there is an ever-increasing number of individuals who use credit cards to pay. The vast majority of people opine that there is indeed a dramatic rise in the use of credit cards. However, other refute this supposition and think that it has adverse ramifications. In my opinion, I strongly believe that credit card payment is now the norm in the modern world. this essay will first elucidate the pros and cons of this phenomenon, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are various advantages in paying through credit card. Firstly, card payment is more convenient. this is because it can be used across the globe and there is no need to exchange currency when paying. Moreover, the card itself is lighter that a numerous amount of coins or bank notes. To cite a prime example, based on my own experience, I prefer to have multiple credit cards than taking a huge amount of money when I am traveling. thus it is quite evident that these cards are more handy when traveling abroad.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that using credit cards have some drawbacks, primarily on security issues. As a matter of fact, people cannot use this card anonymously, thus the user do not have privacy. For instance, a recent study showed that more than 90 percent of every transaction an individual makes can be tracked by the authorities. Hence, it is clear there is a privacy issue in transacting via credit cards.
In conclusion, considering what has been discussed above, it is indeed more convenient to pay though credit card but it poses a major privacy issue to the holder. I strongly recommend to use credit cards only when necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75415282392 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64350804591 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2558972372 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1764705882 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256340270446 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843470138469 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515514072094 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163605861435 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452783062953 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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