Some people believe that finding a job is essential after graduation, while others believe that continuing education proves to be more essential. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
it is often argued that being employed after university study is better that pursuing higher education. A vast majority ofpeople opine that continuing education after graduation is more significant. however, others refute this supposition andthink that it has adverse ramifications. In my opinion, I strongly believe that getting a job immidiately after collegeis more beneficial. this essay will first elucidate the assertion of both points of view, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
On one hand, pursuing higher education after a university study means increasing the chance of employability of having
a higher salary job in the future. In other words, most big companies are looking for individuals who have higher educations.
To cite a primary example, a recent study shows that in 2018 most for the fortune 500 conpanies hired people who have a
masteral or doctorate degree. however, this essay disagrees with this view because pursuing higher education is extremely
expensive and time consuming.
On the other hand, being employed right after graduation means being able to earn money for a living. As a matter of fact,this approach is much better because an individual will be able to practice what he or she learned in the university at thesame time earning a money. For instance, it has been proven by various research that people who started their career right after
graduation has more savings than other people. Thus, this essay agrees to this point of view because individuals who work can stillpursue higher education by using what they earn while working.
In conclusion, considering what has been discussed above, it is indeed better to be employed after studying in a university. I recommend that this approach should be followed by people who have just graduated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33916083916 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80373581495 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9973014573 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.8 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195037519432 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720156786034 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539394051576 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735150743941 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622664659059 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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