Sports and games create distrubance in student's life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that athletic events and physical activities have negative impact on the life of students because it affects their concentration. It is agreed that competitions in sports and games have a detrimental effect in the academic performance of a student. this will be shown by analyzing that participating in this physical activities requires an enormous amount of time as well as energy.
Undoubtedly, when school children join to compete in sport events, it requires them to allocate a substantial amount of their time for an intensive practice. Due to the competitive nature of these athletic competition, participants sacrifice their time to study in exchange for a training. To cite a primary example, a recent study has shown that 95 percent of the student athletes allocate five hours of practice for these events. Thus, it is quite evident that these sports and games is a disturbance in a student's life.
Furthermore, these competitions need a tremendous amount of energy. In fact, most of the students who participated in these events are physically drained after the event and cannot perform any academic works after it. For instance, a study have shown that athletes who joined intramural in their schools have no time to study because they are extremely tired. hence, it is clear that sports affect a student's concentration in studying.
In conclusion, sporting events and games requires a significant amount of time and energy to students. hence, these events should not be encouraged in schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20647773279 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97277941163 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0488252752 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200242060495 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863658926135 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788222688878 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126376763821 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466037245489 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.