Regions and countries' geography situation affect people's behavior and their success. What is your opinion?
Some people argue that intelligence and hard work determines ones success and attitude irrespective of where they live. But, majority of the people would agree that geographical location of a nation plays an important role for people to succeed due to its connectivity to other parts of the world, and availability of opportunities to be successful. I strongly believe that people living in a geographically advantageous location have more opportunities to achieve success.
First and foremost, people living in a remote location or town have little exposure to other cultures and opportunities which has significant impact on their success. This also limits their capability of communicating with other cultures. For instance, though my friend is a great chef, he is not as popular and successful as Gordon Ramsay since he lives in a rural town far away from Sydney.
On the other hand, a strategically placed geographic location offers countless opportunities and exposure to a multi-racial community. Natives or migrants from those areas have more options to accomplish their goals in order to be successful. According to a study by The Cambridge University, USA, more than eighty percent of popular people in every profession are from cities such as New York, London and so on.
To summarize, I strongly assert that geographical location plays an important role in peoples success which primarily depends upon the availability of opportunities at their disposal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38961038961 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18115551011 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.166811594 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119101860976 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527823599762 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302218007885 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079250758152 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248675551536 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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