Regions and countries' geography situation affect people's behavior and their success. What is your opinion?
The topic that geographic situation of a region or country has a significant impact on a human being is widely debated with many people claiming this effect plays one of the key roles in their success. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, I will discuss my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are myriad reasons in favor of this region impact on an individual. The most preponderant one is that the surrounding environment has a vital role in developing one's mindset. Not only, it does develop their thinking, but it also helps in building their attitude. For instance, juveniles who come from a village background will have different thoughts when compared to those who come from cities. Needless to say, all these merits stand region impact in good stead, as far as their behavior is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of this environmental impact. The primary one stems from the fact that a person with a good character cannot reach his goal without having any opportunities. To fulfill their dreams, one has to move to a new place where ample opportunities are available. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani, India's richest man reached his goal only after he left his home. Besides, traveling to different places gives great experiences and help in their growth. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this argument.
To conclude, we can say that the impact of society on an individual is mostly confined to their behavioral development, but it contributes very less when coming to their career growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73272691076 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9277643175 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133158822672 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426126529117 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548877917228 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087678824484 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413889334428 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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