Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
Today most of the cities across the world are facing very high levels of air pollution. This has led to governments across the world motivate their citizens to use more of green transport systems such as bicycling, walking and in some places even skating. In the current scenario wherein we are experiencing levels of pollution which are even higher than the danger levels the use of non polluting means of transport should be encouraged in all the ways possible.
Many European countries in the recent years have encouraged their citizens to use bicycles while commuting to work. For this they've even developed separate lanes which are exclusively used by bicycles to ensure their safety. Most governments have even offered free cycles at various public places to motivate their use. This example is now being adopted by many Asian countries as well.
Also many multi national companies have set a specific day in a year where the employees are advised to come to office either on cycles or by walk. In the city of Pune located in Western India 24th June was prescribed as no vehicle day by all IT companies of a particular area. The pollution levels recorded on that day were 20 times lower than the average levels. More such methods should be adopted by not only governments but also various NGO's and companies should discourage citizens from the use of private cars.
As the diseases caused by air pollution continue to take a toll of lives in various countries the use alternate means of transport is now being increasingly motivated. In conclusion this essay has listed positive changes that can take place if alternative means of transport is encouraged.
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... citizens from the use of private cars. As the diseases caused by air pollution co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92526690391 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58823349942 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4898357443 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225782620519 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758762477609 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071393436586 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129475475562 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354811869044 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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