Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
Modern man has raised from bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed, accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. the topic is the people who use private cars, should the authorities discourage them from travelling in private cars, even they should more use of other means of transport like bicycles, skates, the subway. I will discuss some points to support this topic in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, if people will use bicycles or skates, then they can save their money, which spent on expensive cars. Moreover, they can also save their natural fossil fuels, which are demolishing day by day because of over usage. Furthermore, bicycles are also good source of exercise, they can keep fit and healthy to their bodies. Besides this, when people travel in public vehicles they meet others, that improve their communication skills and they can also learn many things from others. In addition, this proposal also help to improve the economy of country, due to which country can develop more and more.
On the other hand, some people think that travelling in trains or buses is not good. Because it is fully wastage of time, due to which cannot reach on their destination at correct time. Apart from this, it is not comfortable for their body, because sometime they have to face many problems in the public vehicles.
In conclusion, every coin has two side, likewise, this topic also has mixe bag. But according to my opinion government should do some improvements in the public vehicles, thus population can incourage for travelling in government vehicles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...mprovements in the standards of living. the topic is the people who use private car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98876404494 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53566074038 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3119293486 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159553087176 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549281280772 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116926124555 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108751448402 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130452756495 0.0609392437508 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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