Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
Some people argue that older employees should not continue their work whereas others believe senior citizens have to continue their jobs to reduce the financial load upon the nation. However, in my perspective, they should be taken as advisors.
Firstly, every person learns lesson from their work experiences and one knows the procedures to follow to increase the efficiency at works. Provided that older workers are engaged as advisors, young employees have an opportunity to move forward conveniently by escaping all the arena of difficulties which were solved before by the older workers. For instance, in a IT company of Japan where all the retired workers are involved as advisors are able to contribute by suggesting the youths the straight way of achieving the task which are merely possible in absence of these advisors.
Secondly, it is a tribute to older workers if they are regarded as advisors. For a country to remain prosperous, I believe, its older citizens have to be cheerful. As long as retired employees are considered as advisors, they will be engaged and remain happy. In an online survey conducted amongst ten thousands people aged above sixty five, it is found that eighty percent of them work as an advisors in the same sector from where they had retired and they want to continue the post until their health hinders.
In a nutshell, age should not be obstacle for people who `are interested to continue their work; however, it is wise to decrease the work load and hours per week tributing their age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: a; IT
... by the older workers. For instance, in a IT company of Japan where all the retired ...
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...he older workers. For instance, in a IT company of Japan where all the retired workers ...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an advisor' or simply 'advisors'?
Suggestion: an advisor; advisors
...und that eighty percent of them work as an advisors in the same sector from where they had ...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, it is wise to decrease the work load and hours per week tributing their age. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00389105058 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5902709415 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1815684311 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162181494809 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781843984476 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533143820526 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101553169097 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242510876845 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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