The mass media including TV, radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
Some people believe that the communication has great influences in our thoughts and behaviours whereas others argue on the opposite. However, in my perspective, foremost view is more practical.
Firstly, good news on the newspapers, internet motivates people when they read the news. If the news about different aspects of the society that we find in the internet is all about crimes, rape, burglary, corruption then definitely such news does not encourage individuals. For example, in a survey conducted among the graduates of university students, most of them replied that they like to migrate overseas to achieve a secured life free from being bad news.
Secondly, rules, laws, by which the government want to abide its citizens are spread to citizens by mass communication: Internet, TV, newspapers, radio. When any citizen finds such news, it starts spreading by mouth to mouth which makes citizens cautious about the rules to follow. For instance, when people came to know one of the new laws is that they are not allowed to capture photos of anybody without his/her consent is the most shared news nowadays by the people in Facebook.
In a nutshell, media has great effects in the way how people think and behave in the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08292682927 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67322414047 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648780487805 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2625358386 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.777777778 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0652784139157 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027700486109 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381147661079 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0431171819664 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253765494559 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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