In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting? If voting is compulsory in a democratic society, what are come conclusions we can draw about the nature of democracy?
Recently, the topical issue of public rights has provoked a heated debate. Although contested by many, it is a widely held view that it should more advantageously be a mandatory obligation for each person to vote as it leads to the large-scale democracy. this is a belief with which I strongly concur. Provided with further statistics, a cogent argument will be made before drawing a logical conclusion.
From the sociopolitical perspective, it is imperative that the public participate in the governmental affairs, which concern them directly. One means of doing so is by casting their votes or taking part in polling at regular intervals. There are, in general, a wider variety of issues in each country which primarily demand the general public’s viewpoints. As certain notable examples, subjects affiliated with society, foreign affairs, economy, and national long-term objectives, not to mention educational or health agendas, can be cited.
In addition, with people’s increased involvement in politics will come greater democracy. this is due in part to the fact that all members of society may commonly feel that they are contributing substantially towards their country’ prosperity. Not only a stronger sense of community but also the closer cooperation will equally be attained, while people take a leading role in decision-making process. The concrete evidence of such sentiments can come from an extensive survey conducted in Norway in 2016, which established the close correlation between the sense of community and people’s taking part in the social matters.
In conclusion, the democracy seems bound up inextricably with the public presence in numerous political affairs and can <font size="4">partly be </font>upheld as long as people are well prepared to vote. this is why it is my main contention that everyone ought to have a voice and the most desirable fashion would be by voting. However, with the benefit of hindsight, it seems that the more we research, the further we may discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44339622642 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31181645606 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 139.433497537 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635220125786 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7310991455 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139791341887 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426793512724 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356744067489 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842224597625 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245490071483 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 55.0591133005 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.