In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory.Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting?If it is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about ‘Nature of democracy?’
In this burgeoning epoch of Compulsory voting in a democratic society, contemporary human dwells in a world which is shaped by the latest trends and approaches coming across the globe points for years. The opponents and proponents have their perceptual intellection to support their ideas. Before deducing a fair conclusion, I am going to shed some light on both the aspects in the upcoming paragraphs.
According to the first school of the thought, many people say that voting gives the right to the country's citizens to choose their leader. Moreover, voting not only to give knowledge about public preferences but also helps to get information about the candidates. Apart from that, if voting is compulsory, then people of the country pay more attention to political issues.
However, few others believe that if voting is not compulsory, a majority of people avoid voting. Furthermore, if voting is made compulsory, people will be forced to know about the candidate, masses themselves will ask questions about the candidate's education, capabilities, and track-record along with his vision of the future. last but not least, making voting compulsory will make people more aware of contestants financial and criminal records to take the best decision as to who should the public vote.
To prorate, after having a lot of thoughts and deliberations with myself on this topic, I inclined to state that yes compulsory casting of a vote is an imperative step in a democratic society but we cannot ignore the fact that its implication in a friendly manner is of vital importance, so compulsory voting is mandatory for a democracy to be a democracy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'candidates'' or 'candidate's'?
Suggestion: candidates'; candidate's
...themselves will ask questions about the candidates education, capabilities, and track-reco...
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Line 9, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...rd along with his vision of the future. last but not least, making voting compulsory...
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Line 13, column 244, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ot ignore the fact that its implication in a friendly manner is of vital importance, so compulsory v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18587360595 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9326307948 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3862232793 50.4703680194 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287946866957 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09853798215 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538733489641 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15896199426 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269378682503 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.