Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience
In recent days, The heated argument was going on about the experience in life is the best teacher and some of them opposed and they think that only by studying books and going to school will have the best experience in future. Furthermore, I will discuss detail topic in the upcoming paragraph.
People think that going to school and learning books have more experience but, I strongly oppose it because of this kind of reading and learning will not give life experience it’s just teaching them a practical skill which is useful for future employment and job career. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I just read what in the book and I wrote in the exam but in particle life, there are no related topics which I studied at university.
For that reason, I will suggest that life experience has more benefits for students than reading textbooks. The main point is to view that learning through experience is more interesting and we can learn many things; then, it gives creativity to do more. For instance, students by learning in the book will be easily known so far by interacting with real-life means they can learn early without memorizing.
In a nutshell, controversial for this topic have many several arguments, but I believe that benefits through books and the school will not give more effective when compared with life experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64935207243 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0765656267 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285421925032 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125091641894 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708136366508 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176470203363 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222598732441 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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