Some people argue the laws changes human behavior but some disagree. do you agree with it?
The importance of laws which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this nation. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that laws have been very strict, so the human are aware and follow laws. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that laws should be necessary for all humans. Needles to say, all these merits stand in good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that some people are disturb due to strict laws they do not follow and punished. I think the law should be broken because if anybody break the law they are punished or any fined. Besides, the laws are important in human life but do not strict. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of laws are changes human behavior are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disturbed'.
Suggestion: disturbed
...st alarming one is that some people are disturb due to strict laws they do not follow a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58628038093 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9132180802 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189353170434 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060902613546 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703471438766 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112385897396 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690890688816 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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