Some people believe that aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. Give your opinion.

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Some people believe that aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. Give your opinion.

one of most conspicuous trends of the today’s world is a colossal upsurge in higher education plays pivotal towards an individual’s professional life. some masses believe that higher education is to make ready for employment. but other oppose this notion. So, this essay will highlights the both aspects in my upcoming paragraphs.

On the one hand, there are several reasons behind this notion but first and foremost is that higher education is more beneficial for people because they provide a lot of knowledge and experience. Moreover, it is also helps the people in many ways. For instance, with the knowledge it also change human living standard behavior and get ready for job.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned preposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides this, some individuals believe that higher education is not guarantee a job. In addition, sometimes graduate people cannot achieve the exact palace in a job and also think that achieve higher education degree it’s totally waste of time and money.

In view of the argument’s outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of higher education is more than disadvantages.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 195.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91925075723 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3496862859 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314004240702 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123951932157 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140654940799 0.071462118173 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171633517253 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601578835193 0.0609392437508 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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