Some people believe law changes human behaviour. Do you agree/disagree?
Altering behaviour by legislating laws has become a controversial issue among public all around the world. Although this issue is regarded by a considerable number of dwellers as thoroughly both constructive and positive, others hold opponents' view. I am inclined to profoundly believe that laws have both influential and permanent effects on social behaviour.
There are several reasons why rules and regulations can change and modify social confrontations and they are quite advantageous. First and foremost, an array of inhabitants argued that these limitations play a pivotal role in people's lives by developing public awareness. For instance, if a society does not have strong legislations, the choas will increase in a plethora of topics just because of lack of information. Furthermore, not only are laws vital role in development of nations, but also they standardize settlers' habits by controlling them frequently. According to the new research which was conducted by Tehran university, the juvenile delinquencies are diminished by the youths who live in a society which has strict rules than the other one with lenient ones.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that the spirit of each law can provide populations with various catastrophic points. No sooner had they committed any crime, than they had a fear of the punishment, and this factor converts to perpetual fear in people's mind. hence, some scientists strongly believe that individuals never change their manners completely, and a rule just a prevention tool. In addition, self-changing requires loads of other features including appropriate education, suitable upbringing, rich culture, and merely by laws it cannot alter.
In conclusion, while regulations might have some demerits, I am quite sure that they can adjust people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...erts to perpetual fear in peoples mind. hence, some scientists strongly believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08312556755 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9329652171 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164867041159 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539261800788 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466451156409 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901976324295 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443707488004 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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